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This Red Dwarf Devotion
(Verse 1)
You keep one face to the sun, a permanent stare
Skin that cracks from the heat, burning the air
I can’t get too close, I learned that before
Saw you melt down a promise, right on the floor
And your other side sleeps in a diamond-hard frost
A wasteland of silence, whatever the cost
Don't look for a sunrise, it never arrives
Just this half-life condition where our weird love survives
(Chorus)
But I built my home on the terminus line
Between your searing perfection and the dark in your mind
This gravity holds me here in your sway
I live in the twilight at the edge of your day
This Red Dwarf Devotion, the air is so thin
It's the only damn place that I let myself in

(Verse 2)
The horizon’s the border where all of the shadows run
From the furnace you are and the vacuum you've become
My friends send out signals I don't listen to
Saying ‘Come back to a world with a sky that's all blue’
They don't understand it, this balance I keep
One step to the blaze, and I'm in way too deep
One step to the cold, and my breathing will seize
So I pray for a stalemate, I beg for a freeze
(Chorus)
'Cause I built my home on the terminus line
Between your searing perfection and the dark in your mind
This gravity holds me here in your sway
I live in the twilight at the edge of your day
This Red Dwarf Devotion, the air is so thin
It's the only damn place that I let myself in
(Bridge)
Maybe I’m crazy to map out my world
On the treacherous edge you have always unfurled
Is this true survival, this hairline design?
Or just my addiction to living on your line?

(Outro)
Just living on the line...
(Your fire... your ice...)
I’m making it mine...
(My paradise...)
Yeah, living on the terminus line...
...this red dwarf devotion's all mine.
About The Song
"This Red Dwarf Devotion" transforms the astronomical discovery of tidally locked "super-Earths" into a potent metaphor for being in a relationship with a volatile person. Inspired by a news story about planets like Kepler-186f, which permanently face their star, creating one side of perpetual fire and another of eternal ice, the song explores the emotional 'terminator line'—the thin, habitable zone of twilight between these extremes. It’s not about space; it’s about the human struggle to find a livable, breathable space within a love defined by intense passion and stark coldness. The narrator isn't a passive victim but an active participant, consciously building their life on this fragile border. The musical influence leans toward the atmospheric, intimate, and bass-driven style of artists like Billie Eilish, where the minimalist production creates a sense of both claustrophobia and deep personal space, mirroring the song's core tension.
Production Notes
The track should be built on a foundation of a deep, pulsing sub-bass, mimicking a slow, anxious heartbeat. Vocals are key: capture them with a high-end condenser mic like a Neumann U47 for extreme intimacy and presence. Verses should be delivered in a close, almost-spoken-word style, full of nuance and breathiness. The chorus vocal should lift slightly, adding a layer of harmony that feels strained but beautiful. The arrangement must be sparse—a bed of atmospheric pads (think Oberheim OB-X) that swell and recede, and a simple, syncopated rhythm on a hi-hat or rimshot. Mix Automation: During the "fire" references, subtly widen the stereo field and bring up high-frequency sizzle. For the "ice" references, narrow the mix and introduce a cold, digital plate reverb. The performance must embody resilience; the singer is not weak, but a survivor who has adapted to an impossible environment.
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