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We're That 200 Year Concrete
[Verse 1]
I trace the hairline fracture splitting up the floor
Starts right where you stood that night, and runs straight to the door
We’ve been living with the damage, learned to walk around the break
Built these opposing kingdoms for our own damn stubborn sake
We wore the years of silence like a heavy winter coat
Forgot the secret language that we wrote in our own throats.
[Pre-Chorus]
But there’s a dormant promise in the aggregate and stone
A microscopic fix for us we've always kinda known
It’s waiting for the right conditions, waiting for the sky to break
A chemical reaction for a single tear’s own sake.
[Chorus]
We’re that two-hundred-year concrete, baby
Hardened up and acting like we’re fine
Yeah, we’re that two-hundred-year concrete, baby
But you were always the limestone in mine
Let a little bit of water in, watch the mending start
To fill the cracks right through this living limestone heart.
[Verse 2]
Remember patching up that drywall, paint was on your face
You said “Some things are worth the work, worth putting back in place”
It's funny how a memory decides to pay a visit
I’m looking at this floor and all I’m thinking now is “is it?”
Is there enough foundation left to even try to trust?
Some ancient strain of loving sleeping dormant in the dust.
[Pre-Chorus]
‘Cause there’s a dormant promise in the aggregate and stone
A microscopic fix for us we've always kinda known
It’s waiting for permission, waiting for the sky to break
A chemical reaction for a single tear’s own sake.
[Chorus]
We’re that two-hundred-year concrete, baby
Hardened up and acting like we’re fine
Yeah, we’re that two-hundred-year concrete, a crazy
Kind of love that waits two hundred years to shine
Let a little bit of water in, watch the mending start
To fill the cracks right through this living limestone heart.
[Bridge]
It won’t be perfect, it won’t be smooth
You’ll always see the line
But it ain't a sign of weakness, girl
It’s a different kind of design
A scar that proves we survived the quake
A map of where we held the line.
Don’t you wanna see it through?
Don’t you wanna know it’s true?
[Guitar Solo]
(Emotional, melodic guitar solo. Not shredding, more like a Jason Isbell or Chris Stapleton solo—storytelling with bends and sustain. It follows the chorus melody but adds more tension and release, ending on a hopeful, resolved note.)
[Outro]
Go on and let the water in
Oh, a little bit of rain...
We’re that two-hundred-year concrete...
Let’s wash away the pain...
Let it in...
...that living limestone heart.
(Song fades on a sustained acoustic guitar chord and the sound of gentle, distant rain.)
About The Song
This song transforms a scientific breakthrough into a raw human story. Inspired by the news of “self-healing concrete” that uses dormant bacteria to mend its own cracks, 'We're That 200 Year Concrete' stands as a powerful metaphor for a relationship that has been fractured but never truly broken. The 'hairline fracture' on the floor represents the deep but quiet damage between two people. The core concept is that their fundamental bond—the 'limestone'—is still present, lying dormant like the bacteria in the concrete, waiting for the right catalyst ('a little bit of rain,' or emotional vulnerability) to begin the process of healing from within. It’s a story about resilience, enduring love, and the hope that even after years of stubborn silence, the components for repair have been there all along, waiting to be reactivated. It's not about being fixed, but about having the innate ability to mend.
Production Notes
Genre: Alt-Country / Indie Rock
Influences: Jason Isbell, Chris Stapleton, Post Malone (rock-leaning)
Vocals: The lead vocal should be gritty, honest, and have a slight country drawl. Use a warm tube mic like a Neumann U 67. The performance should feel personal and immediate. For the pre-chorus, pull the vocal back to be more intimate, then let it belt with controlled power in the chorus. Harmonies should be organic and slightly loose, not perfectly stacked.
Instrumentation: The core is a driving rhythm section. Drums should be punchy and organic (think a Ludwig Black Beauty snare). The main riff is carried by a Martin D-28 acoustic guitar, played with purpose. A Fender Telecaster provides the atmospheric lead lines and the emotive solo, using a touch of reverb and delay but remaining very present in the mix.
Arrangement: Build dynamics strategically. Verse 1 is sparse—acoustic, bass, a simple kick/snare pattern. The pre-chorus strips back even further to build tension. The chorus explodes with full drums, layered guitars, and backing vocals. The bridge should feel like a moment of quiet revelation before the soaring guitar solo takes over.
Mix Automation: Ride the vocal fader to emphasize key emotional lines. Automate the reverb on the snare to make the choruses feel bigger and more epic than the verses. Pan the acoustic and electric guitars to create a wide stereo field that envelops the listener.
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