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(Verse 1)
You leased the space behind my eyes
Kept your opinions memorized
Lived on a diet of your praise
Navigating a pixelated maze
My pulse was synced up to your mood
My whole world colored and reviewed
Every morning, checked my worth
On the little patch of earth you let me own
(Pre-Chorus)
But last Tuesday, I cancelled my subscription
Refused to write your daily fiction
I built a fortress out of hours
Cut the wires, killed the powers
(Chorus)
And maybe this silence is violence
Maybe this quiet's a riot I'm starting in me
I don't need your curated sunshine, your counterfeit high
I'm drawing a line in the light you design
Yeah, I'm pulling the plug on your beautiful lie
'Cause I'd rather be breaking than faking a smile
I'm drawing a line in the light

(Verse 2)
My hands forgot what they could hold
Chasing stories you had sold
Got phantom limb notifications
At your mercy, losing patience
I am orchestrating stillness now
I’m the architect of my own vow
To starve the ego that you fed
To un-learn the anxious words you said
(Pre-Chorus)
'Cause last Tuesday, I demolished the connection
Rejected your version of perfection
I built a fortress out of hours
Poisoned the roots, and burned the flowers
(Chorus)
And maybe this silence is violence
Maybe this quiet's a riot I'm starting in me
I don't need your curated sunshine, your counterfeit high
I'm drawing a line in the light you design
Yeah, I'm pulling the plug on your beautiful lie
'Cause I'd rather be breaking than faking a smile
I'm drawing a line in the light
(Bridge)
One breath. Two. The vacuum calls.
My own four corners feel like walls.
A little flicker begs me back,
A hit of poison in the black...
But I'm arresting my own hand
Making a one-man final stand

(Outro - Distorted, Angry, Overdriven)
YOUR SUNSHINE!
YOUR HIGH!
DRAWING A LINE IN THE LIGHT YOU DESIGN!
YOUR BEAUTIFUL LIE!
I’M FAKING A SMILE!
I’M DRAWING A LINE IN THE... LIGHT!
About The Song
"Drawing a Line in the Light" translates the modern phenomenon of a "digital detox" into a powerful metaphor for escaping a toxic, controlling relationship. The news of tech executives seeking silent retreats sparked the core idea: not one of peaceful disconnection, but of a volatile, active, and angry reclaiming of one's own mind. The "light" of the screen in the title represents the ever-present, judgmental gaze of a manipulative partner. The protagonist's journey from quiet compliance to a furious declaration of independence mirrors the musical influence of artists like Billie Eilish, moving from sparse intimacy into a cathartic explosion of sound. This song isn't about logging off; it's about actively drawing a boundary to survive, applying the Active Agency Mandate by framing self-preservation as a conscious fight ('I am orchestrating stillness') rather than a passive state of being.
Production Notes
The track should have a massive dynamic range. Verses need a close-mic vocal treatment, possibly using a Neumann U-47 FET or similar condenser to capture every nuance and breath. The only accompaniment should be a slightly detuned acoustic guitar or a simple, melancholic lo-fi synth pad. The Pre-Chorus builds tension by introducing a subtle, fast-ticking hi-hat and a low sub-bass drone. The Chorus must be an explosion: slam on an overdriven, fuzzed-out bass (think Muse's 'Hysteria'), heavily distorted electric guitars panned wide, and powerful, live-sounding drums. The lead vocal here should switch to an SM7B to handle the aggressive, almost-screamed delivery. The mix automation is crucial to make the transition from verse to chorus feel like a wall of sound hitting the listener. The outro doubles down on this, with layered, chaotic vocal ad-libs and feedback bleeding until an abrupt, sudden cut to silence.
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